The left side of the monster is too formless, makes his arm loos less menacing. What about expanding the base of the monster so he has a larger center of gravity?
Hm. Yeah. Good idea. I could have his body pretty much take up the whole frame.... maybe even lengthen the format so he's taller.... Thanks!!!
amazing composition improvement!! it looks great.
I like the changes you made to the composition. Adds a looot more drama with all the depth and foreshortening.I feel that it may work slightly better if the whole scene was dropped down and to the right a tiny bit, but I'm compositionally retarded so it may just be my imagination.